Good day, Fr. Johnannes,
I am a writer and editor; English is my maternal language. Below are my comments (I hope they are helpful):
1) readabilty: 8/10. In journalism the writing level is generally targeted toward a grade 8 level ... I think yours is higher than that but it was not an issue for...
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